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Thursday, September 24, 2015

Warrior cat 1ST page

My warrior cats book (only 1 page :3)


mrrow meowed dark kit as she got up and padded over to the clearing to look at the sun rise
 "what are you doing up so early dark kit?" meowed a familiar voice, it was Falconpaw
"what are you doing up so early" dark kit challenged
"my duties as an apprentice. Now tell me what you are doing!" hissed Falconpaw playfully 
"I'm watching the sunrise" meowed dark kit, she looked towards the sky and her eyes sparkled with sunlight.
"Well... ok but you have to get ready for your apprentice ceremony! Right know you look like you've been attacked by a badger." hissed Falconpaw and smiled then he walked away.
He cant call me names like that! hmph Dark kit growled and got some fresh-kill from the fresh-kill pile. she spotted Dirtface coming out of the nursery looking for dark kit so she could groom dark kits hair and Dirtface spotted her looking around for a place to hide before he came to groom her fox-dung! she already spotted me! I can groom myself  Hissed dark kit to herself 
"There you are dark kit I was worried! where have you been?" Dirtface meowed 
"I hadn't gone far mother, and you know I'm going to be an apprentice today! i can take care of myself and you don't have to groom me I can do it myself!" hissed dark kit her tail furiously waving in the air
"Hmph, you will regret whet you just said. I am your mother!" Dirtface growled and turned back towards the nursery and squeezed back into it. i know but you don't control me! hissed dark kit in her head. Might as well start doing apprentice chores!  meowed dark kit in delight. she rushed over to the entrance of the camp on scuttled inside.
"hey young one what are you doing here?" meowed a low deep voice
"Arkstar!" Dark kit meowed her hackles rose and flank stopped moving "I... I, I was going to do my apprentice chores..." her head down and ears down. 
"but you are not an apprentice yet!" Arkstar meowed "i was coming to make you an apprentice now! I was just on a patrol down at snakerocks! c'mon you are now an apprentice!" Arkstar started moving forward into the camp and jumped on top of the highrock "Everyone old enough to catch there own food come here belo the highrock!" meowed arkstar Dark kit stepped in front of the highrock and someone brushed her side "falconpaw?" she whispered "what do you want!" 
"I am becoming a warrior the same time you are becoming an apprentice!" He smiled and looked at Arkstar
"today one kit is ready to become an apprentice. Dark kit are you ready?" Arkstar meowed. Dark kit nodded and it continued "then the powers of starclan until you get your warriors name you will be known as Darkpaw, may starclan look down to you. Your mentor will be littletree." Arkstar smiled and turned from darkpaw to falconpaw "This youg apprentice is ready to become a warrior. Falconpaw do you promise to fulfil the warior code even at the cost of your life?" 
"I do!" meowed falconpaw
"Then the ancestors of Starclan look down to you as FalconWing"




That's all! Hope you enjoyed if there are any typos please let me know so I can fix it THANK U!!

More coming soon...

8 comments:

  1. More of the short stories coming soon every day (all dark kit/paw/rose/star)

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    also if you do comment if there is a typo dont be rude and say 'THERE IS A TYPO IT RUINED THE SHORT BOOK!!' please just say 'oh hi runningwhisker there is a typo to let you know :D' OK?

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  2. also i didnt edit :3 there will be alot of typos

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  3. Hey! (This is JadeSilentWhisper) I saw your comment on deviantart. You have a nice site. I think it's cool that you're writing a fanfic. I used to do that a lot when I was younger, and now I write other stories. Keep up with what you love, it's the best type of hobby you can have. :3

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  4. Hey there! This is a pretty good story so far! Make sure you keep writing =) I used to do this all the time before life got too stressful for me to keep up with both. But it's awesome to see there are still people who love warriors like me, it's a great book series!

    -primrose

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  5. Hey there! This is a pretty good story so far! Make sure you keep writing =) I used to do this all the time before life got too stressful for me to keep up with both. But it's awesome to see there are still people who love warriors like me, it's a great book series!

    -primrose

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    1. Thank you so much! Right now im focusing on a different story i might put on the blog...

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